tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post8810737439668205984..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: Keith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-35114325662121414222014-11-05T04:30:58.231+00:002014-11-05T04:30:58.231+00:00And you both knew what the because was... Sad and ...And you both knew what the because was... Sad and poignant, Keith.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-79244655672404270682014-11-01T17:37:51.798+00:002014-11-01T17:37:51.798+00:00Sometimes there is no answer other than because......Sometimes there is no answer other than because...especially if you are a parent. Relationships and their passing can be a very painful thing. Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-70434623540731262402014-10-31T03:25:51.679+00:002014-10-31T03:25:51.679+00:00A story poem ~ beautifully composed.A story poem ~ beautifully composed.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-30987395806363515942014-10-31T01:35:57.553+00:002014-10-31T01:35:57.553+00:00Yup ... just what Wendy said! LOL! Good conversati...Yup ... just what Wendy said! LOL! Good conversational aspect to this breakup ... when words escape and 'because' is the only thing one can say ... it does say it all ...Susan Lindquisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-26983230360980637922014-10-31T00:09:14.222+00:002014-10-31T00:09:14.222+00:00Wonderful use of anaphora and epistrophe repetitio...Wonderful use of anaphora and epistrophe repetition in this which instills a stilted, conversational reality to the piece. Good writing!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-83276411005449537882014-10-30T21:55:01.664+00:002014-10-30T21:55:01.664+00:00So sad, so bittersweet. (I enjoyed your reading! ...So sad, so bittersweet. (I enjoyed your reading! What a cool idea! Really enjoyed your work.)Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-37804313319585886732014-10-30T20:06:05.524+00:002014-10-30T20:06:05.524+00:00ah, sadness makes it hard to hide your broken part...ah, sadness makes it hard to hide your broken parts.Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-32130887215533430142014-10-30T15:56:41.183+00:002014-10-30T15:56:41.183+00:00Keith,
It is a sad moment when a parting is about...Keith,<br /><br />It is a sad moment when a parting is about to happen, especially if it is a surprise and without any real explanation...Tears are always involved...<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-17534891232791931672014-10-30T14:30:58.573+00:002014-10-30T14:30:58.573+00:00Also, thank you for visiting my blog and leaving a...Also, thank you for visiting my blog and leaving a comment. :)Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-65555710781879615732014-10-30T14:30:37.948+00:002014-10-30T14:30:37.948+00:00This is a sad moment and I can see how it could be...This is a sad moment and I can see how it could be frustrating as well. Clearly there are words to be said.<br /><br />I like the flow of it and the simple style. Well done.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-26297830065546893612014-10-30T11:53:38.984+00:002014-10-30T11:53:38.984+00:00a beautiful poem when emotion speaks and not words...a beautiful poem when emotion speaks and not words....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-81098081640333854532014-10-30T11:17:13.701+00:002014-10-30T11:17:13.701+00:00I could feel the tension, taste the pain. Loved th...I could feel the tension, taste the pain. Loved the way it oozed with despair. Well done.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-60444593593193620272014-10-30T10:52:57.014+00:002014-10-30T10:52:57.014+00:00When feelings are involved less words spoken the b...When feelings are involved less words spoken the better. It may just start an argument. They shouldn't push their luck! Nicely Keith!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-11572117573444720942014-10-30T08:30:47.220+00:002014-10-30T08:30:47.220+00:00both of them knew the answer to this because that&...both of them knew the answer to this because that's what a true love is knowing without saying anything<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2014/10/woolen-socks.html" rel="nofollow">Woolen Socks</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-77130409509914714982014-10-30T01:45:03.229+00:002014-10-30T01:45:03.229+00:00Such a sad poem and they both know it is because ....Such a sad poem and they both know it is because ..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-12863484105792257552014-10-29T23:50:23.503+00:002014-10-29T23:50:23.503+00:00Leaving is hard !Leaving is hard !rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-87766236210256470992014-10-29T19:00:00.894+00:002014-10-29T19:00:00.894+00:00Wow this is a strong one despite its simplicity. J...Wow this is a strong one despite its simplicity. Just because.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-75886359377968178772014-10-29T17:35:11.608+00:002014-10-29T17:35:11.608+00:00Aww... so sad.Aww... so sad.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-2604151867058191562014-10-29T14:07:56.936+00:002014-10-29T14:07:56.936+00:00I like the progression in your poem, Keith, the re...I like the progression in your poem, Keith, the repetition which is not quite one and how well it works. Short answers are not really answers.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-43465647272551691152014-10-29T12:43:05.425+00:002014-10-29T12:43:05.425+00:00I think people who give short non-explanatory answ...I think people who give short non-explanatory answers are hard to deal with oftentimes. Answers such as 'because' or 'I don't know' which say nothing. I like the way the tables were turned at the end of the poem. Perhaps she will learn to give more thought to answers in the future, but then again perhaps not.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-63651010314997453902014-10-29T11:02:31.000+00:002014-10-29T11:02:31.000+00:00seperating is never easy...especially when the emo...seperating is never easy...especially when the emotions are so strong....and though we know a reason...and it makes sense now...i wonder, at times....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-47119619208489175872014-10-29T10:49:42.935+00:002014-10-29T10:49:42.935+00:00How sad - leaving is such sweet sorrowHow sad - leaving is such sweet sorrowelaine https://www.blogger.com/profile/17075935631756457901noreply@blogger.com