tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post8574412722618474173..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: Writers Island - HauntedKeith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-21783581906759656102007-10-31T18:40:00.000+00:002007-10-31T18:40:00.000+00:00Keith, You always hold my interest. Your stories...Keith,<BR/><BR/> You always hold my interest. Your stories are so suspenseful and exciting. What a great read thanks for this post. MUAHHead Cookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878795387580544093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-90353018796434422442007-10-31T13:58:00.000+00:002007-10-31T13:58:00.000+00:00I was so relieved to know that he was safe finally...I was so relieved to know that he was safe finally and slept the sleep of an angel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-91486548397765680242007-10-31T11:53:00.000+00:002007-10-31T11:53:00.000+00:00I love your style of writing. You had me hooked fr...I love your style of writing. You had me hooked from the first word. I'm a fugitive from Poetry Thursday and am only just getting settled in on Writers island. I will be catching up on your pieces asap. Sorry this is late but my server has been down.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-29980393409554709522007-10-31T09:32:00.000+00:002007-10-31T09:32:00.000+00:00Thankyou so much for the flattering comments made ...Thankyou so much for the flattering comments made thus far. I'm new to this fiction business, but I have been encouraged by you to carry on.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-45957247843910399282007-10-31T09:26:00.000+00:002007-10-31T09:26:00.000+00:00I could feel the freezing cold and heartracing des...I could feel the freezing cold and heartracing despair ... wonderfully toldAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-64742860603114638882007-10-31T04:06:00.000+00:002007-10-31T04:06:00.000+00:00Fantastic Keith.Fantastic Keith.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-67731133288167883662007-10-30T23:45:00.000+00:002007-10-30T23:45:00.000+00:00Thanks for the wild ride! So scary and very well t...Thanks for the wild ride! So scary and very well told.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-48734277950870199672007-10-30T22:18:00.001+00:002007-10-30T22:18:00.001+00:00Way to go! Taking us along on such a goosebumpy jo...Way to go! Taking us along on such a goosebumpy journey. Now I'll have to leave the lights on when I sleep!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-14858651684761623462007-10-30T22:18:00.000+00:002007-10-30T22:18:00.000+00:00I felt as if I were the one running scared! Oooo! ...I felt as if I were the one running scared! Oooo! THanks for stopping by t oread mne ! I had fun with it! I love the WI prompts! I am far from being a 'writer' !Pam Arieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14128538283620147478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-35118324439896511872007-10-30T22:08:00.000+00:002007-10-30T22:08:00.000+00:00your descriptive writing and prose is awesome Keit...your descriptive writing and prose is awesome Keith.. I love this story..<BR/>PEace, KaiKaiBlue https://www.blogger.com/profile/09820083757874351493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-85909692647952502442007-10-30T15:45:00.000+00:002007-10-30T15:45:00.000+00:00Jeez - The poor guy is being tossed around like a ...Jeez - The poor guy is being tossed around like a bird in a cat's paws. The realism makes it especially haunting. <BR/><BR/>Nice workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-38247147791152211202007-10-30T15:38:00.000+00:002007-10-30T15:38:00.000+00:00Wow... just wow. This was terrific. You are a supe...Wow... just wow. This was terrific. You are a superb writer! This had me totally riveted!Penhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14007835767017361390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-74878296174323137462007-10-30T14:26:00.000+00:002007-10-30T14:26:00.000+00:00Very pacey indeed.......good job, you caught me! O...Very pacey indeed.......good job, you caught me! Off to read part II of last week's.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-17615215169663811102007-10-30T13:49:00.000+00:002007-10-30T13:49:00.000+00:00great story! Now I'm in the halloween spirit!(tha...great story! Now I'm in the halloween spirit!<BR/>(thanks for your kind comment earlier :)Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-92148015914015723572007-10-30T12:35:00.000+00:002007-10-30T12:35:00.000+00:00You do have a such beautiful talent for story tell...You do have a such beautiful talent for story telling, my heart is beating hard and fast -thank you. Onto reading part 2 of stranger taleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-77242882233012860482007-10-30T12:16:00.000+00:002007-10-30T12:16:00.000+00:00If my stories ever become half as good as this I w...If my stories ever become half as good as this I will die a happy man.Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-32065456927612193292007-10-30T11:20:00.000+00:002007-10-30T11:20:00.000+00:00Wow, what a pace, such suspense, yikes, you've don...Wow, what a pace, such suspense, yikes, you've done it again, more please ... who was it what was it?Cheriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139558255321645746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-42716623443140676142007-10-30T10:21:00.000+00:002007-10-30T10:21:00.000+00:00I found myself racing through this, too scared to ...I found myself racing through this, too scared to stay and focus on each new twist. (The same way I'd have to peer out through my fingers during a frightening scene in a movie.) My heart is pounding, this was VERY evocative.<BR/><BR/>Well done Keith, even if I'm too much of a wimp to truly appreciate it.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02409530202277375625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-30825586823284788702007-10-30T10:19:00.000+00:002007-10-30T10:19:00.000+00:00excellently paced story telling... loved it....excellently paced story telling... loved it....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-22461676714400175132007-10-30T02:18:00.000+00:002007-10-30T02:18:00.000+00:00Keith, this is the real Little Wing.Don't let the ...Keith, this is the real Little Wing.<BR/>Don't let the cyber stalker club scare you off.<BR/><BR/>This was a great piece of writing, but then you know that, :)Little Winghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16378040962672320259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-88581810904081745892007-10-29T22:36:00.000+00:002007-10-29T22:36:00.000+00:00You are a such a great story writer. Got the goose...You are a such a great story writer. Got the goosebumps now. Must go out in the sun. Have a great day Keith.Marjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-8782614377419608292007-10-29T20:21:00.000+00:002007-10-29T20:21:00.000+00:00Thanks Gimme! Job done.Thanks Gimme! Job done.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-32925068398219267252007-10-29T19:47:00.000+00:002007-10-29T19:47:00.000+00:00Nice haunting, Keith. You have a couple little th...Nice haunting, Keith. You have a couple little things to tweak, if you want, like 'the to they' and quotations as in dialog have " instead of'. Nothing serious - but I enjoyed the story line.Magdalen Islandshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12685952336207093650noreply@blogger.com