tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post8402240926614637558..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: Flash Fiction for Aspiring WritersKeith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-5213384529661146342016-05-05T09:42:46.516+01:002016-05-05T09:42:46.516+01:00The picture was open to so many interpretations wh...The picture was open to so many interpretations which has what has made reading everyone's posts so interesting.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-69058010617772483492016-05-05T09:40:23.104+01:002016-05-05T09:40:23.104+01:00Thank you very much RavyneThank you very much RavyneKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-6706200851113574172016-05-05T09:18:01.318+01:002016-05-05T09:18:01.318+01:00Nice descriptions, Keith - 'frothing waves'...Nice descriptions, Keith - 'frothing waves' 'jagged rocks' etc... sad story.. I love how we interpreted this prompt so differently!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-9532820006510642662016-05-05T05:29:52.590+01:002016-05-05T05:29:52.590+01:00Wonderful write, Keith.. such a sad taleWonderful write, Keith.. such a sad taleRavynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16842889270339265787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-37286529507878266862016-05-04T20:46:37.237+01:002016-05-04T20:46:37.237+01:00This wasn't the easiest story to write since t...This wasn't the easiest story to write since the cliff top walk close to where I live is infamous for such deeds. Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-13028561005615718752016-05-04T17:08:24.958+01:002016-05-04T17:08:24.958+01:00That was beautiful and sad.That was beautiful and sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-88411546426833511922016-05-04T14:08:15.444+01:002016-05-04T14:08:15.444+01:00That's so kind of you Susan. Thank you.That's so kind of you Susan. Thank you.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-37237810232506184402016-05-04T11:42:22.123+01:002016-05-04T11:42:22.123+01:00That was such a lovely, poignant story, Keith.
Su...That was such a lovely, poignant story, Keith.<br /><br />Susan A Eames at<br /><a href="http://susan-a-eamestravelfictionandphotos.blogspot.ie" rel="nofollow">Travel, Fiction and Photos</a><br />Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-39825316776961058692016-05-04T11:13:19.735+01:002016-05-04T11:13:19.735+01:00I live close to an infamous cliff where around 20 ...I live close to an infamous cliff where around 20 people each year take a fatal decision. Many stand and think. Thanks Samantha.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-60480022639281777232016-05-04T10:14:12.570+01:002016-05-04T10:14:12.570+01:00I wonder how many other people stand in that very ... I wonder how many other people stand in that very site and wish that they too could take flight, review and address their errors. Great story!!<br /><br />@Samantha/samratkel from<br /><a href="http://shadowrealities.me/" rel="nofollow">Shadow Realities</a> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528175079851985189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-30422836080920315812016-05-04T00:32:38.464+01:002016-05-04T00:32:38.464+01:00Indeed, Thanks very much MichaelIndeed, Thanks very much MichaelKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-4199910517396892352016-05-04T00:30:04.279+01:002016-05-04T00:30:04.279+01:00So nicely done Keith, enjoyed your take and those ...So nicely done Keith, enjoyed your take and those questions, one does wonder about it all.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-56154319853073561352016-05-04T00:09:29.592+01:002016-05-04T00:09:29.592+01:00That's very kind of you to say so SonyaThat's very kind of you to say so SonyaKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-86950247892821684682016-05-04T00:08:38.124+01:002016-05-04T00:08:38.124+01:00Thank you for taking the time to read and comment ...Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my post.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-62535354702247481742016-05-04T00:07:29.231+01:002016-05-04T00:07:29.231+01:00I know exactly where you are coming from Josie. B...I know exactly where you are coming from Josie. But everybody has their own way of dealing with situations and who are e to say they are wrong. Thank you so much for your generous words.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-45012279535277791232016-05-03T23:19:43.676+01:002016-05-03T23:19:43.676+01:00Wonderful, vivid descriptions that make this sad t...Wonderful, vivid descriptions that make this sad tale a joy to read. Great job!Sonyahttps://only100words.xyz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-20596308089586377312016-05-03T19:32:04.531+01:002016-05-03T19:32:04.531+01:00Wonderfully descriptive! Great tale! Wonderfully descriptive! Great tale! swritingshttp://www.swritings.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-19561543749107967652016-05-03T18:41:05.787+01:002016-05-03T18:41:05.787+01:00You do such excellent descriptions of your charact...You do such excellent descriptions of your characters and their situations and this one is no exception, Keith. We can feel his sense of despair, and we are saddened by resulting ending. I always want to be the one to scream "No, wait, don't give up yet!" because I believe that there is always, always a reason to hope.Josie Two Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18388032819905416258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-41907325868043822892016-05-03T18:25:55.523+01:002016-05-03T18:25:55.523+01:00I don't know where the story appeared from, an...I don't know where the story appeared from, and even less so what led to his tragic demise. Thank you Amanda.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-72393940657495924292016-05-03T18:21:22.662+01:002016-05-03T18:21:22.662+01:00That's very kind of you GrahamThat's very kind of you GrahamKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-72109813090231020572016-05-03T17:42:31.999+01:002016-05-03T17:42:31.999+01:00Nice descriptions of the lone figure and the cart ...Nice descriptions of the lone figure and the cart containing all his possessions. Your image makes me feel sorry for him, not to mention when you say all that is left of him is a rotting wheel. He seems like a forgotten person in life, and that is an awful tperson to be in that situation. I can see why he wants to fly away.Mandibelle16https://www.blogger.com/profile/13560087719498316954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-91799329931997076962016-05-03T10:45:43.869+01:002016-05-03T10:45:43.869+01:00What an enchanting story. Very vivid descriptions....What an enchanting story. Very vivid descriptions. An enjoyable read.Graham Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01248393091480494859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-70631235689208331992016-05-03T08:44:54.248+01:002016-05-03T08:44:54.248+01:00Thanks so much i b.Thanks so much i b.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-53001080514648464032016-05-03T08:40:03.581+01:002016-05-03T08:40:03.581+01:00Thanks PJ. I'm glad it worked!Thanks PJ. I'm glad it worked!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-13280455151236038092016-05-03T08:39:28.985+01:002016-05-03T08:39:28.985+01:00Thanks DeeDee. I'm must take a look back to to...Thanks DeeDee. I'm must take a look back to to award now the Challenge is over. Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.com