tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post7505775530067739882..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: He should have knownKeith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-82392245903148964812015-07-27T07:13:45.004+01:002015-07-27T07:13:45.004+01:00Nicely written story ... like how you rendered tha...Nicely written story ... like how you rendered that anger and disappointment so realistically. BastetAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-11975152483231954042015-07-26T21:15:04.175+01:002015-07-26T21:15:04.175+01:00Yes, the letter arriving just as he was having br...Yes, the letter arriving just as he was having breakfast did bring on a rather violent reaction! Hopefully he'll go back and clear it all up when he calms down. Thanks for visiting Elizabeth.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-5811748708097226962015-07-26T19:35:08.544+01:002015-07-26T19:35:08.544+01:00The juxtaposition of the beginning and final image...The juxtaposition of the beginning and final images tells the story. The state of the kitchen and the reality of the man are so very similar,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-65145697980629994592015-07-26T18:21:49.045+01:002015-07-26T18:21:49.045+01:00Errr....interesting theory! Thanks for dropping by...Errr....interesting theory! Thanks for dropping by.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-48062077635725464322015-07-26T15:41:30.992+01:002015-07-26T15:41:30.992+01:00The guy probably deserved it. Unlike a man, whose...The guy probably deserved it. Unlike a man, whose reasoning power is hampered by the apparatus between his legs, a woman is too smart to ditch a really good man:)Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781684841036567770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-47505978204363636282015-07-26T13:33:08.448+01:002015-07-26T13:33:08.448+01:00Story of my life Old Egg! Story of my life Old Egg! Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-52341548277699589212015-07-26T12:41:40.269+01:002015-07-26T12:41:40.269+01:00Thought so - butter wouldn't melt as regards o...Thought so - butter wouldn't melt as regards our companions (maybe)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-82745978152214344542015-07-26T12:39:59.656+01:002015-07-26T12:39:59.656+01:00Duped again...it happens. Perhaps reminding the ch...Duped again...it happens. Perhaps reminding the character in this piece of the tears that were shed by a previous partner in another romance might ring a few bells for him. It cuts both ways. Haven't we all been in that situation? Well not to the extent of being barefoot in the snow!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-51159389225746217272015-07-26T11:47:59.964+01:002015-07-26T11:47:59.964+01:00No, not either of them! I believe she was called D...No, not either of them! I believe she was called Delilah - or was it Jezebel?Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-8772074820338368312015-07-26T09:43:14.655+01:002015-07-26T09:43:14.655+01:00Sometimes we can never know - maybe that's wha...Sometimes we can never know - maybe that's what makes people so enticing...she wasn't called Alice was she (Rosey would never do such a thing)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-4142781248180052912015-07-26T09:31:28.921+01:002015-07-26T09:31:28.921+01:00Thanks so much Ga HThanks so much Ga HKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-60095070720978944942015-07-26T09:30:58.547+01:002015-07-26T09:30:58.547+01:00So true Lorna, so true.So true Lorna, so true.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-85531575802143161462015-07-26T09:30:29.490+01:002015-07-26T09:30:29.490+01:00Thank you Darla.Thank you Darla.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-69347278450308844722015-07-26T09:30:02.299+01:002015-07-26T09:30:02.299+01:00such things happen, sadly. Thnks Annalisa.such things happen, sadly. Thnks Annalisa.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-33991025618294901632015-07-26T09:29:03.126+01:002015-07-26T09:29:03.126+01:00He'll certainly have cold feet! Thanks for com...He'll certainly have cold feet! Thanks for commenting.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-73999608479066639672015-07-26T09:28:24.152+01:002015-07-26T09:28:24.152+01:00Nor me Rochelle but I couldn;t resist it this time...Nor me Rochelle but I couldn;t resist it this time! Thanks for hosting once again.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-67695684131470988172015-07-26T09:27:19.172+01:002015-07-26T09:27:19.172+01:00He'll get over it! thanks DEE DEEHe'll get over it! thanks DEE DEEKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-38599283253529920182015-07-24T18:46:44.684+01:002015-07-24T18:46:44.684+01:00Poor guy. Artfully combined prompts, I like it. Hi...Poor guy. Artfully combined prompts, I like it. His desperation is very clear, as is his complete focus on her. Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-52583075152951946142015-07-24T17:53:02.515+01:002015-07-24T17:53:02.515+01:00Yes, the world does go on even when we feel as if ...Yes, the world does go on even when we feel as if it really shouldn't. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-11456783119807709852015-07-24T17:10:44.218+01:002015-07-24T17:10:44.218+01:00How sad but very evocative. Well done.How sad but very evocative. Well done.Darla M Sandshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212760625717298992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-40463250299666413762015-07-24T13:56:31.917+01:002015-07-24T13:56:31.917+01:00Such a cruel way to end it. I loved the imagery of...Such a cruel way to end it. I loved the imagery of him barefoot in the snow.Annalisa Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14943610814274794998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-89478993583242432772015-07-24T11:27:03.946+01:002015-07-24T11:27:03.946+01:00I feel his pain.
Good piece.I feel his pain.<br />Good piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-1831177604945111072015-07-24T09:57:13.142+01:002015-07-24T09:57:13.142+01:00Dear Keith,
Good job of combining prompts. You w...Dear Keith, <br /><br />Good job of combining prompts. You won't hear me say that often as I'm not a fan of the prompt combining most of the time. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-39993587983125964332015-07-24T09:04:31.447+01:002015-07-24T09:04:31.447+01:00awwww...poor himawwww...poor himDeepahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764125425140331692noreply@blogger.com