tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post7329897679007408770..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: (Fiction) Friday and Sunday Scriblings!Keith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-33408895919014991312008-01-14T17:43:00.000+00:002008-01-14T17:43:00.000+00:00great post! enjoyed all three of those dates...great post! enjoyed all three of those dates...little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-69569556033610783562008-01-14T09:17:00.000+00:002008-01-14T09:17:00.000+00:00I always enjoy reading here, your words are entert...I always enjoy reading here, your words are entertaining yet real. A great post- I really felt for the young man though, how sad. <BR/><BR/>This is a great place to lose myself...thanks Keith.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-18941981009492010272008-01-14T01:58:00.000+00:002008-01-14T01:58:00.000+00:00dear sir,you write wonderfully. however, the sund...dear sir,<BR/><BR/>you write wonderfully. however, the sunday scribblings was my favorite today.<BR/><BR/>unrequited playground love. bittersweet. *sigh*a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!https://www.blogger.com/profile/10559289518691894880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-53328379264244974342008-01-14T00:49:00.000+00:002008-01-14T00:49:00.000+00:00poor guy... it's first date!!Love your stories...poor guy... it's first date!!<BR/><BR/>Love your stories...latreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521924109825718501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-64960410431388500662008-01-14T00:34:00.000+00:002008-01-14T00:34:00.000+00:00What great little gems, these are. You really capt...What great little gems, these are. <BR/>You really captured the essence of the young man on his first date. Too bad it didn't have a happier ending :)Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-9086859522592871042008-01-13T21:21:00.000+00:002008-01-13T21:21:00.000+00:00No "personal Barbie Doll" for him, how sad....exce...No "personal Barbie Doll" for him, how sad....excellent tale, I loved it. <BR/><BR/>Penelope Anne<BR/>http://wannabeawritersomeday.blogspot.com/2008/01/sunday-scribblings-date.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11518964123008830311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-34427492015493844632008-01-13T18:38:00.000+00:002008-01-13T18:38:00.000+00:00I love your first FF. I was trying to think of one...I love your first FF. I was trying to think of one to write that has a happy ending and couldn't... but you did... in a wonderful way!!!<BR/><BR/>Dee<BR/>http://pavinganewroad.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-68978330242595252812008-01-13T17:36:00.000+00:002008-01-13T17:36:00.000+00:00Thinking aloudI would be honoured to appear on you...Thinking aloud<BR/><BR/>I would be honoured to appear on your bogroll. But only if I can pop you onto mine!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-4150039764986379402008-01-13T16:47:00.000+00:002008-01-13T16:47:00.000+00:00OH NO! Your poor little chap stood up on his firs...OH NO! Your poor little chap stood up on his first date. I loved your descriptions, and I am so sad for that young man.Forgetfulonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-74679351208602652072008-01-13T14:58:00.000+00:002008-01-13T14:58:00.000+00:00Yes!Oh!Ouch!:)Yes!<BR/><BR/>Oh!<BR/><BR/>Ouch!<BR/><BR/>:)Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-55708254249353604722008-01-13T14:03:00.000+00:002008-01-13T14:03:00.000+00:00Oh, my, I was right there with that young chap pre...Oh, my, I was right there with that young chap preparing for his date...and then! Great story teller you are. You captured this age-old dilemma so well.<BR/>Thanks for visiting my blog.nonizambonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08381779175217605700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-50108870570006435352008-01-13T13:12:00.000+00:002008-01-13T13:12:00.000+00:00my, my you';'ve been busy..i still have to start o...my, my you';'ve been busy..i still have to start on these!!!<BR/><BR/>i loved all the three..the first was interesting...i too had visualized a scene where its non malicious...let's see...<BR/><BR/>ummm..can i ...add you to my blog roll....pls ?aMushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-35456984357712715382008-01-12T21:19:00.000+00:002008-01-12T21:19:00.000+00:00Well written pieces with lots of emotion. Enjoyed...Well written pieces with lots of emotion. Enjoyed Rosey stories too! <BR/><BR/>Nice to meet you!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-55392463275174705152008-01-12T19:35:00.000+00:002008-01-12T19:35:00.000+00:00Oooh.I feel bad for the guy going to his first dat...Oooh.I feel bad for the guy going to his first date. I bet we can all relate to him in some way. On my first date, I didn't know it was a date. I thought we were going out as a group of friends to see the movie Top Gun and then have pizza. But, I found out it was a double date.Sharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12124663602522143973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-20452589499086004322008-01-12T18:07:00.000+00:002008-01-12T18:07:00.000+00:00Keith, I had read your date post before this. I am...Keith, I had read your date post before this. I am reading it again! <BR/><BR/>It is painful when a date does not show up. Especially for a teenager. You depicted that very well.<BR/><BR/>I have linked you to my blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-64329751569735659262008-01-12T14:37:00.000+00:002008-01-12T14:37:00.000+00:00prats - I would be honoured to appear on your blog...prats - I would be honoured to appear on your blog roll!But only on the condition that I can add yours to mine!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-14956805986592648762008-01-12T14:09:00.000+00:002008-01-12T14:09:00.000+00:00Loved both the stories. The first makes you want t...Loved both the stories. The first makes you want to react, while the second one, brings a knowing smile and feel like saying....welcome, to the world of life...<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>Is it ok to roll you on the blog?Pratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-6251184649835597972008-01-12T10:12:00.000+00:002008-01-12T10:12:00.000+00:00Great short stories. Poor guy who got stood up on...Great short stories. Poor guy who got stood up on his first date! I fed your fish, but I think that 2 of them (red and turquoise) are dead. :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-18146928540490063302008-01-12T08:46:00.000+00:002008-01-12T08:46:00.000+00:00Your fiction carries so much truth. So well writte...Your fiction carries so much truth. So well written. I'm glad Little Wing doesn't get the second one, because I do! <BR/><BR/>Wonderful Sunday scribbling, but I kept hoping the girl would show up in the end. So sad! <BR/><BR/>You really do deserve blog of the world award, congratulations Keith!<BR/><BR/>Hugs GigglesGiggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-43994095578981243022008-01-12T01:54:00.000+00:002008-01-12T01:54:00.000+00:00Great shorts! Couldn't pick a fave and fortunately...Great shorts! Couldn't pick a fave and fortunately I don't have to. I'll just like them ALL!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-58733886153075356942008-01-12T01:41:00.000+00:002008-01-12T01:41:00.000+00:00My first time here - came over from Sunday Scribbl...My first time here - came over from Sunday Scribblings - I was so hopeful for this little dude and then so sad. *sniff* poor fella.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-64309581489848162502008-01-12T00:12:00.000+00:002008-01-12T00:12:00.000+00:00I liked the date one - especially the line about p...I liked the date one - especially the line about putting away his Action Man and claiming his own barbie doll.<BR/><BR/>The first story was a great take (a positive take) on I never want to see you again. And the second - whilst I wasn't married, was in a similar type position with a very nasty man who just didn't 'get' "I never want to see you again!"<BR/><BR/>Thanks for stopping by to read my story!Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-17970573128668728332008-01-11T23:21:00.000+00:002008-01-11T23:21:00.000+00:00I like the third one - Date. I imagined a freckle-...I like the third one - Date. I imagined a freckle-face kid with braces, standing sadly waiting for a date.lissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-55292810636490307972008-01-11T22:41:00.000+00:002008-01-11T22:41:00.000+00:00I love all three of these. Nice separate little sh...I love all three of these. Nice separate little shorts that tie into one another nicely. Nicely done!Square1https://www.blogger.com/profile/13559171378908608414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-81904076102179772042008-01-11T20:03:00.000+00:002008-01-11T20:03:00.000+00:00The first one was the best for me...I havent attem...The first one was the best for me...I havent attempted it yet, been head deep in work, will have to catch up on all your other pieces too, on my way there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com