tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post711632894940707329..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: It's not too much to ask for.....a chilling tale!Keith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-61411108587027838712010-01-30T02:38:56.139+00:002010-01-30T02:38:56.139+00:00Good story. I liked the ending.Good story. I liked the ending.terryhaferkampnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-77355554146424070782010-01-29T20:28:50.902+00:002010-01-29T20:28:50.902+00:00Oh no, now I will have nightmares!!
(But this piec...Oh no, now I will have nightmares!!<br />(But this piece is great.. :-D)Miahttp://millimia.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-461632153425422562010-01-29T19:01:20.166+00:002010-01-29T19:01:20.166+00:00I loved the story. The feelings are still the same...I loved the story. The feelings are still the same in both life and death I guess.vivihttp://vividumas.wordpress.com/fiction-fridays/fiction-fridays-140-leons-birthday/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-10087067972798900902010-01-29T17:36:12.347+00:002010-01-29T17:36:12.347+00:00Ahh, how odd that you both chose to go down simila...Ahh, how odd that you both chose to go down similar paths- I like it though. It makes me wish I'd thought of something similar now!! At first I thought that they really were married, but then you think that Donna doesn't know him, but then the final twist at the end- it turns out that she does know him and that he's come back from the dead- very wuthering heights!! I like!!rosenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-91694638539627024032010-01-29T14:00:53.084+00:002010-01-29T14:00:53.084+00:00It would seem we thought along similar lines! you...It would seem we thought along similar lines! you wove your stroy in well - sucking hte reader in and its only on the second read you realise what is actually happening...<br /><br />visitors can see mine at http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2010/01/forgytan.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.com