tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post7084883217255006035..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: You don't know about me - a short storyKeith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-83138505956145050572010-09-09T11:39:51.949+01:002010-09-09T11:39:51.949+01:00Well that was unexpected! Nicely done.Well that was unexpected! Nicely done.Tilly Budhttp://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-81856724741133050912010-09-08T10:50:39.587+01:002010-09-08T10:50:39.587+01:00Nice story! I enjoyed reading. :-)Nice story! I enjoyed reading. :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/my-terrain-carry-on-tuesday-69.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-8343661993744909742010-09-08T08:08:57.934+01:002010-09-08T08:08:57.934+01:00Great story. I am still trying to work out another...Great story. I am still trying to work out another possible scenario that she was merely telling a tale to punish him for his long absence and abandonment of her mother. <br /><br />Sleepless night to ponder over this.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-55804853325195988152010-09-08T03:33:43.749+01:002010-09-08T03:33:43.749+01:00this was just stunning. I absolutely loved it. I...this was just stunning. I absolutely loved it. I wonder, like Nara if she made it up as revenge. Either way - it works very well!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-84282254425338437532010-09-08T03:16:35.899+01:002010-09-08T03:16:35.899+01:00A very unusual twist to what would have been merel...A very unusual twist to what would have been merely a well-told but easily anticipated ending. Nice.( I did think, though, for a moment that she was going to turn out to be an agent posing as his daughter just to see if she could trap him into confessing. My mind is a little cruel too.)Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-71982954940477025722010-09-08T02:48:21.615+01:002010-09-08T02:48:21.615+01:00This is very hard to do...you have managed to keep...This is very hard to do...you have managed to keep everyone in their place and make the story work. Well done!<br /><br />Thank you for stopping by.<br /><br />b<br /><br />http://www.retireinstyleblog.comb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-69927828560911950342010-09-07T21:52:28.289+01:002010-09-07T21:52:28.289+01:00Great tension, held me from start to finish. Nice ...Great tension, held me from start to finish. Nice twist at the end.<br /><br />Maybe I'm paranoid, but I can't help thinking she made that story about her birth up to get even.Nara Malonehttp://naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-4738205827164795252010-09-07T18:04:16.370+01:002010-09-07T18:04:16.370+01:00Wow!! I didn't expect any of that ... brillian...Wow!! I didn't expect any of that ... brilliant story, I loved it!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-70955749554802666742010-09-07T17:30:50.092+01:002010-09-07T17:30:50.092+01:00Ahh, we build castles and never check the map for ...Ahh, we build castles and never check the map for quicksand. Enjoyable read, and satisfying as well.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://1sojournal.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/the-penultimate-child/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-68344562254237111732010-09-07T15:55:55.184+01:002010-09-07T15:55:55.184+01:00Great twists and turns in your story - a real '...Great twists and turns in your story - a real 'family' saga. I wonder if John Sanders will keep going to work now Emily is no longer there to watch over..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-38128935998628605202010-09-07T14:26:41.559+01:002010-09-07T14:26:41.559+01:00Heartbreaking! Sometimes it's better to not kn...Heartbreaking! Sometimes it's better to not know. <br />Reminded me of the Mayor of Casterbridge and the blow to his spirit when he comes face to face with truth of a similar nature.<br />Simply put, I enjoyed the post. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-45352292650360377872010-09-07T07:57:18.601+01:002010-09-07T07:57:18.601+01:00Fantastic story with a surprising end. When you wr...Fantastic story with a surprising end. When you write I always don't want it to end. Arohanui marjaMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-50236560343663631462010-09-06T19:15:33.644+01:002010-09-06T19:15:33.644+01:00Wow. That totally threw me off balance. I didn&#...Wow. That totally threw me off balance. I didn't expect that one. And...I think this story was absolutely brilliant. You should make this a longer piece...even a book.Khttp://khaalidah.blogspot.com/2010/09/you-dont-know-about-mebut-you-could.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-87667909218332757482010-09-06T17:42:00.806+01:002010-09-06T17:42:00.806+01:00I liked the turn around. Very beautifully told!
u...I liked the turn around. Very beautifully told!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/revealed.html" rel="nofollow">unmasked</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-61623384931593805842010-09-06T14:33:28.046+01:002010-09-06T14:33:28.046+01:00This is kind of déjà vu at the beginning: I wrote...This is kind of déjà vu at the beginning: I wrote a similar story about a "long-lost" father. Yours is complete, satisfying, a million miles better than mine.<br />I enjoyed the read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-24714368987053388332010-09-05T21:04:55.291+01:002010-09-05T21:04:55.291+01:00And SO the battle begins.....
Very well written Ke...And SO the battle begins.....<br />Very well written Keeth...not that my opinion matters or that I would know if it was well written.Lets just say i liked it!<br /><br />Cheers mate ......Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.com