tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post6586383126224129570..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: The mêléeKeith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-74823691996172277842015-04-20T18:24:02.374+01:002015-04-20T18:24:02.374+01:00Wow! A story only in dialogues. I've tried thi...Wow! A story only in dialogues. I've tried this, but flopped.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-46590484960865138622015-04-20T18:23:52.203+01:002015-04-20T18:23:52.203+01:00Wow! A story only in dialogues. I've tried thi...Wow! A story only in dialogues. I've tried this, but flopped.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-69329467447626842552015-04-15T21:20:13.063+01:002015-04-15T21:20:13.063+01:00Thanks once again ShilpaThanks once again ShilpaKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-25971463987038501872015-04-15T21:18:40.742+01:002015-04-15T21:18:40.742+01:00I panicked writing it!I panicked writing it!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-20038549538972984352015-04-15T21:17:26.827+01:002015-04-15T21:17:26.827+01:00Thanks so so much!Thanks so so much!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-65317686572476083232015-04-15T21:15:55.860+01:002015-04-15T21:15:55.860+01:00Thanks AnnalisaThanks AnnalisaKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-49763377132847061602015-04-15T19:21:37.796+01:002015-04-15T19:21:37.796+01:00Wonderful tension in dialogue, I can really feel h...Wonderful tension in dialogue, I can really feel her panic at the end.Raesquiggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03197356927659610268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-40795215565817479512015-04-15T19:01:45.235+01:002015-04-15T19:01:45.235+01:00Oh My God! The scenario changed pretty quickly! Gr...Oh My God! The scenario changed pretty quickly! Great twist! :)Shilpa Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11016927627801620377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-63862463271474358022015-04-15T18:29:29.929+01:002015-04-15T18:29:29.929+01:00Ooh, another chiller. You weren't kidding. ~gr...Ooh, another chiller. You weren't kidding. ~grin~ Best wishes! Oh, and my blog is number 1271 on the A to Z list today.Darla M Sandshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212760625717298992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-30571370276105658942015-04-15T17:54:04.444+01:002015-04-15T17:54:04.444+01:00Glad it had the desired effect! Thanks M!Glad it had the desired effect! Thanks M!keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-55292707514292864582015-04-15T17:48:00.662+01:002015-04-15T17:48:00.662+01:00That's very intense and emotional. Good job!That's very intense and emotional. Good job!M Paxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-6519166076260059112015-04-15T15:56:04.643+01:002015-04-15T15:56:04.643+01:00Great use of dialogue - a lot of tension, and a gr...Great use of dialogue - a lot of tension, and a great twist!<br /><br />Annalisa, writing A-Z vignettes, at <a href="http://annalisacrawford.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Wake Up, Eat, Write, Sleep</a>Annalisa Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14943610814274794998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-68312390459944257112015-04-15T15:40:36.441+01:002015-04-15T15:40:36.441+01:00So true! Thanks for dropping by.So true! Thanks for dropping by.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-71449780069502911642015-04-15T15:39:18.842+01:002015-04-15T15:39:18.842+01:00Me too!Me too!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-18810539875072152512015-04-15T14:30:18.653+01:002015-04-15T14:30:18.653+01:00Oh oh! That got nasty fast. Says how much built up...Oh oh! That got nasty fast. Says how much built up tension was already there. Well done. Good luck with the Challenge!<br /><br />Visiting from <a href="http://untetheredrealms.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Untethered Realms</a>Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-27921698314785448922015-04-15T10:16:56.316+01:002015-04-15T10:16:56.316+01:00Oh, that escalated quickly. I hope Dan isn't d...Oh, that escalated quickly. I hope Dan isn't dead!<br />Tasha<br /><a href="http://tashasthinkings.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Tasha's Thinkings</a> | <a href="http://www.wittegenpress.com/wp_main/blog" rel="nofollow">Wittegen Press</a> | <a href="http://fantasyboysxxx.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">FB3X (AC)</a>Tasha Duncan-Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12591239019422681163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-26907204056947855122015-04-15T09:32:57.919+01:002015-04-15T09:32:57.919+01:00I've always liked that word and it's the f...I've always liked that word and it's the first time I've found a use for it!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-12550657826351748472015-04-15T09:31:39.528+01:002015-04-15T09:31:39.528+01:00He didn't, and to make it worse she broke her ...He didn't, and to make it worse she broke her favourite vase!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-39921564924719202092015-04-15T09:29:55.034+01:002015-04-15T09:29:55.034+01:00Duly corrected! Thanks for visiting.Duly corrected! Thanks for visiting.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-12079149385892384352015-04-15T08:50:46.802+01:002015-04-15T08:50:46.802+01:00That got way out of hand! Yeah, he pushed her too ...That got way out of hand! Yeah, he pushed her too far. I like the word "melee".Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-92042231754052498512015-04-15T05:14:25.019+01:002015-04-15T05:14:25.019+01:00Oh wow! I bet she didn't see that happening wh...Oh wow! I bet she didn't see that happening when she gave him a hit.<br /><br />bettybettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06323135450742337670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-46567976445504779482015-04-15T04:59:05.373+01:002015-04-15T04:59:05.373+01:00quite a melee with unexpected ending. ( the first ...quite a melee with unexpected ending. ( the first "to" in the post should read "do'"please correct)i b arorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17161315866262492520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-30363689158533575072015-04-15T02:01:07.312+01:002015-04-15T02:01:07.312+01:00I wonder! Thanks for dropping by Kathe. It's 2...I wonder! Thanks for dropping by Kathe. It's 2am here and I didn't expect any visitors so soon after posting it - you made me jump!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-32238265179790228182015-04-15T01:44:38.292+01:002015-04-15T01:44:38.292+01:00hopefully she'll get a not-guilty due to self ...hopefully she'll get a not-guilty due to self defense! You write good short stories! Fun to read them!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.com