tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post6031419978321987218..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: Over here, over here....Keith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger53125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-42897071589007119202015-06-21T09:05:58.619+01:002015-06-21T09:05:58.619+01:00You've given me an idea for a tale featuring b...You've given me an idea for a tale featuring both Thanks!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-54333721404490224532015-06-21T09:05:10.063+01:002015-06-21T09:05:10.063+01:00You are certainly not anonymous phylor! I'm fl...You are certainly not anonymous phylor! I'm flattered by the comparison. Thanks so much.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-31057872332492248992015-06-21T09:03:46.013+01:002015-06-21T09:03:46.013+01:00Wow, praise indeed! I've never written in this...Wow, praise indeed! I've never written in this style before and didn't know if it would work, but judging by all these comments it clearly does! Thanks for your generous words.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-48149178428810595412015-06-21T01:54:54.813+01:002015-06-21T01:54:54.813+01:00This is great. The repetition is hypnotic. The eff...This is great. The repetition is hypnotic. The effect of it, and the mystery in the silence is so much scarier than telling what actually happened. Very well done, I'll have to file this technique under 'how to write scary stuff.'Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-90166755773913797672015-06-20T21:29:54.089+01:002015-06-20T21:29:54.089+01:00The silence is as ominous of the tick-tock. Great ...The silence is as ominous of the tick-tock. Great story! A new take on the Pit and the Pendulum. PS I'm not anonymous as the comment suggest! I'm phylor.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-41677578124121949082015-06-20T13:20:06.431+01:002015-06-20T13:20:06.431+01:00Clocks can be worse than clowns. Good shivers!Clocks can be worse than clowns. Good shivers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-38506021987848654352015-06-19T23:24:36.231+01:002015-06-19T23:24:36.231+01:00That's the way I like it. Thanks for calling i...That's the way I like it. Thanks for calling in.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-66212860443054157572015-06-19T23:19:15.880+01:002015-06-19T23:19:15.880+01:00Maybe, maybe not! Thanks for visiting me.Maybe, maybe not! Thanks for visiting me.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-39203815661628877302015-06-19T23:16:21.606+01:002015-06-19T23:16:21.606+01:00I love how the small voice at the start builds int...I love how the small voice at the start builds into a great, noisy kind of chaos, then bang, it's over. Fantastic.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-20132153603417919112015-06-19T23:15:30.319+01:002015-06-19T23:15:30.319+01:00Just as I hoped!Just as I hoped!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-89567526939128359672015-06-19T23:07:45.397+01:002015-06-19T23:07:45.397+01:00Thanks SallyThanks SallyKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-58309017403278542782015-06-19T23:01:42.472+01:002015-06-19T23:01:42.472+01:00Glad it worked!Glad it worked!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-40818350967168747682015-06-19T15:31:30.151+01:002015-06-19T15:31:30.151+01:00this could be the beginning of a great story, let&...this could be the beginning of a great story, let's have a sequeli b arorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17161315866262492520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-19238231693693800052015-06-19T12:31:06.745+01:002015-06-19T12:31:06.745+01:00Very creepy and spooky, great stuff.Very creepy and spooky, great stuff.Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-44228148656847066232015-06-19T09:52:59.279+01:002015-06-19T09:52:59.279+01:00Great suspense!Great suspense!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06682758228934966786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-27518385866274545312015-06-18T17:29:05.705+01:002015-06-18T17:29:05.705+01:00Thanks so much Lorna. It's not my normal style...Thanks so much Lorna. It's not my normal style of writing but, as they say, variety is the spice of life! Quite why I said that I don't know - I try NEVER to use cliches!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-43668944025357291762015-06-18T17:26:46.584+01:002015-06-18T17:26:46.584+01:00Very effective use of sound and repeating. Excelle...Very effective use of sound and repeating. Excellent writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-74193460121451580742015-06-18T17:17:58.327+01:002015-06-18T17:17:58.327+01:00It's the nervous tick that'll give him awa...It's the nervous tick that'll give him away.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-74521490856140766592015-06-18T17:16:23.328+01:002015-06-18T17:16:23.328+01:00I noticed that too. Clearly chandeliers give peopl...I noticed that too. Clearly chandeliers give people the creeps!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-70489035835530498002015-06-18T17:15:35.703+01:002015-06-18T17:15:35.703+01:00As long as it's over there I don't mind! T...As long as it's over there I don't mind! Thanks Betty.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-81132029739899655802015-06-18T14:25:18.901+01:002015-06-18T14:25:18.901+01:00He has got to be careful, it looks like they have ...He has got to be careful, it looks like they have ways to make him 'tock'.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-52938260101798783972015-06-18T14:20:37.931+01:002015-06-18T14:20:37.931+01:00I'd be running by now. I don't even know w...I'd be running by now. I don't even know where I'd be running, I'd just be running! Haha! This one game me chills. I've noticed a lot of ghost stories with this photo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-57378067204286728182015-06-18T14:08:38.651+01:002015-06-18T14:08:38.651+01:00Good one! I'll have to be careful if I ever he...Good one! I'll have to be careful if I ever hear "over here"<br /><br />bettybettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06323135450742337670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-44649562960319464912015-06-18T09:14:32.890+01:002015-06-18T09:14:32.890+01:00We may well have done!We may well have done!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-10074238701559223852015-06-18T09:12:57.791+01:002015-06-18T09:12:57.791+01:00Praise indeed plaridel. Thanks so much.Praise indeed plaridel. Thanks so much.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.com