tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post1665798154421646358..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: Blue velvetKeith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-68829382398128572482015-11-20T22:22:10.213+00:002015-11-20T22:22:10.213+00:00Sad but beautiful ... I too remember that song ......Sad but beautiful ... I too remember that song ... nicely penned. BastetAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-23856563212659308452015-11-17T15:08:23.116+00:002015-11-17T15:08:23.116+00:00Sad, although lovely story, Keith. Also a lovely s...Sad, although lovely story, Keith. Also a lovely song. I remember it when it first became popular. Well done. --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-42662200391823456342015-11-17T14:29:13.593+00:002015-11-17T14:29:13.593+00:00Beautiful. Your piece is a far cry from the creepy...Beautiful. Your piece is a far cry from the creepy David Lynch movie by the same name. :) Well done.Darla M Sandshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212760625717298992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-61348255446031634402015-11-16T19:49:53.781+00:002015-11-16T19:49:53.781+00:00Very sad. The remembered dialogue is so celverly u...Very sad. The remembered dialogue is so celverly used to evoke the emotion in this. Very well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-51453598686172722582015-11-15T14:29:56.568+00:002015-11-15T14:29:56.568+00:00What a touching poem & sad situation, Keith!What a touching poem & sad situation, Keith!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-80784765846250026862015-11-15T12:57:03.535+00:002015-11-15T12:57:03.535+00:00Dear Keith,
I love that song. You did manage to ...Dear Keith, <br /><br />I love that song. You did manage to weave the prompts well, however, it doesn't change my opinion of multi prompt stories. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-83451969353279989652015-11-15T09:43:34.539+00:002015-11-15T09:43:34.539+00:00Well I can't help but think of the film - and ...Well I can't help but think of the film - and wonder why he is clutching the dress - and their last words..hmm..the photo is strangely atmospheric in its blandness - you definitely drew out the best (or worst?) of itJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-5229987866065592122015-11-14T20:41:07.763+00:002015-11-14T20:41:07.763+00:00Great job weaving the two challenges. I like how y...Great job weaving the two challenges. I like how you stated so simply his first words and her last. Very effective. Well done! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-59758377511511675442015-11-14T16:36:37.203+00:002015-11-14T16:36:37.203+00:00This one tears at the heart. ".... the ball g...This one tears at the heart. ".... the ball gown clutched in his arms" oozes a visual that takes us to his pain.<br />Wonderfully done ...!!! We need happeier prompts. ��<br />My hubby created a copper Polish flag sculpture for Bobby Vinton. His son with his wife, son and grandmother stayed with us during Hurricane Charlie. It was quite and experience. Who could forget his singing of Blue Velvet?<br />Hvae a wonderful weekend ...<br />Isadora ��<br />Isadorahttp://insidethemindofisadora.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-62507265518310620442015-11-14T11:12:32.242+00:002015-11-14T11:12:32.242+00:00What a sad and sentimental piece from you today Ke...What a sad and sentimental piece from you today Keith. I see you have left Rosey to titillate us instead.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-78277348542860666022015-11-13T22:28:11.285+00:002015-11-13T22:28:11.285+00:00Very sad, but also very beautiful. Your sunday scr...Very sad, but also very beautiful. Your sunday scribblings prompt blends so seamlessly into your story/poem that I doubt it would annoy anyone. The connection is not forced, which is often seen when prompts are combined.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-64836539297032435072015-11-13T16:55:33.227+00:002015-11-13T16:55:33.227+00:00Awww, that's sad. I remember that song. My m...Awww, that's sad. I remember that song. My mom used to play it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14568739448684157396noreply@blogger.com