tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post2190210127924361102..comments2024-02-11T12:37:14.536+00:00Comments on keith's ramblings: The Stranger - part 1Keith's Ramblingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-66397048726145632802007-10-30T13:52:00.000+00:002007-10-30T13:52:00.000+00:00wow!! I'm excited I didn't see this story till th...wow!! I'm excited I didn't see this story till there was a part 2 written! ( I have no patience for waiting on the end of a good story or movie) Off to see part 2.<BR/>Glad you visited me or I may not have found your creative stories :)Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-19551148982862656732007-10-28T05:45:00.000+00:002007-10-28T05:45:00.000+00:00Keith, you need to know that the littlewing commen...Keith, you need to know that the littlewing comment isn't me.<BR/>It is the work of the Cyber Stalker I have been dealing with.<BR/>I am sorry.<BR/>I am talking about the one signed renee.Little Winghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16378040962672320259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-72019923199214151632007-10-25T09:58:00.000+01:002007-10-25T09:58:00.000+01:00Love the fact that you can intepret this story any...Love the fact that you can intepret this story anyway that you like!Well written--leaves you thinking.Preeti Shenoyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01626823872300694608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-5620399138162015562007-10-25T04:32:00.000+01:002007-10-25T04:32:00.000+01:00Well Keith this was very well written and thought ...Well Keith this was very well written and thought out. I am sorry I did not post anything this week but what a great topic and you my dear did such a wonderful job with this intriguing mystery you wrote. I still think because it was never said but, I want to say that I think the dearly departed was a woman who was having an affair with the mystery man. I could be way off.Head Cookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878795387580544093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-77771956538176125762007-10-24T20:29:00.000+01:002007-10-24T20:29:00.000+01:00I feel like I've just read about a dark angel.I feel like I've just read about a dark angel.Magdalen Islandshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12685952336207093650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-7906382697549300632007-10-24T16:51:00.000+01:002007-10-24T16:51:00.000+01:00I just gottit! The ending. An all-black, flying of...I just gottit! The ending. An all-black, flying off. Well, well.<BR/>(Sgd. Dickiebird.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-21535215644218465702007-10-24T16:49:00.000+01:002007-10-24T16:49:00.000+01:00Don't let her sobs fool you, Keith. She's quite to...Don't let her sobs fool you, Keith. She's quite tough!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-34138876588324178242007-10-24T14:42:00.000+01:002007-10-24T14:42:00.000+01:00Hey Keith, I'm back,have missed your stories but a...Hey Keith, I'm back,have missed your stories but am glad to be back from UK. You can imagine what it was like for me watching the World Cup In UK *sob*KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-11503723683883265492007-10-24T03:03:00.000+01:002007-10-24T03:03:00.000+01:00Mysterious indeed . The not knowing part is beauti...Mysterious indeed . The not knowing part is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-44689270303011211042007-10-24T00:33:00.000+01:002007-10-24T00:33:00.000+01:00Thankyou so much for all your comments! I didn't r...Thankyou so much for all your comments! I didn't realise it would have such an impact. Little Wing - we seem to be on the same wavelength!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-11771585226679721642007-10-23T22:54:00.000+01:002007-10-23T22:54:00.000+01:00as keith mentioned above..But no one felt him push...as keith mentioned above<BR/>..But no one felt him push his way to the front..Nobody knew him, but everyone felt as if they should..great story..reneelittle wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-39629599309575992772007-10-23T22:19:00.000+01:002007-10-23T22:19:00.000+01:00I got the same impression that Herb Urban did...bu...I got the same impression that Herb Urban did...but I guess that is the beauty of this piece, the reader takes from it what they will. Very nice.Karinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-87246199412756473422007-10-23T21:49:00.000+01:002007-10-23T21:49:00.000+01:00This reminds me of a folk story - no answers, just...This reminds me of a folk story - no answers, just suspicions. With a shrug, as if no understanding could be forthcoming...I can see the story being told. Great writing!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-12886981860014478222007-10-23T17:58:00.000+01:002007-10-23T17:58:00.000+01:00Perfect! Especially for the Halloween season. I ...Perfect! Especially for the Halloween season. I was a bit frightened! :) And yes...more please.J Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418645028718782130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-31054212024669390392007-10-23T17:50:00.000+01:002007-10-23T17:50:00.000+01:00I loved the ending, not everything should be told,...I loved the ending, not everything should be told, some must be left for the readers to imagine :)Ramblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04048279856792308653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-41066993636748340102007-10-23T16:58:00.000+01:002007-10-23T16:58:00.000+01:00Aha, the elements of mystery - and the bird repres...Aha, the elements of mystery - and the bird representing the soul? You've followed the scriptwriter's premise - always leave them wanting more. :)paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-15502063221337987842007-10-23T16:16:00.000+01:002007-10-23T16:16:00.000+01:00Great visual at the end with what I assume was a b...Great visual at the end with what I assume was a black crow watching over the funeral. Very intriguing story. Was the mysterious stranger in black the soul of the recently departed? Fascinating story.Beau Brackishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-65601802945742692372007-10-23T15:00:00.000+01:002007-10-23T15:00:00.000+01:00......But no one felt him push his way to the fron.........But no one felt him push his way to the front. <BR/>......Nobody knew him, but everyone felt as if they should.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-43815070802568947602007-10-23T14:23:00.000+01:002007-10-23T14:23:00.000+01:00as has been said here before,, the intrigue has ca...as has been said here before,, the intrigue has captured my curiosity... is there more you can tell me????paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-13410113506022049732007-10-23T13:39:00.000+01:002007-10-23T13:39:00.000+01:00Yes, intrigue's the word. Good one.Yes, intrigue's the word. Good one.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-31390820169586614362007-10-23T13:24:00.000+01:002007-10-23T13:24:00.000+01:00It has all the right elements of intrigue. And lef...It has all the right elements of intrigue. And left us wanting more. Do we get it?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-68990070183340599712007-10-23T12:06:00.000+01:002007-10-23T12:06:00.000+01:00Great post, love your intrigue! Thanks for visitin...Great post, love your intrigue! Thanks for visiting my post - it's all true!Cheriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139558255321645746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-23206095529464171022007-10-23T09:53:00.000+01:002007-10-23T09:53:00.000+01:00Very mysterious! I'm intrigued. Are you going to t...Very mysterious! I'm intrigued. Are you going to tell us who it was, and what the connection was between the stranger and the bird?Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02409530202277375625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-62024003513579877582007-10-23T08:53:00.000+01:002007-10-23T08:53:00.000+01:00Keith you are such a brilliant writer!Thank you so...Keith you are such a brilliant writer!<BR/>Thank you so much for your kind comment, and come on back!Little Winghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16378040962672320259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36300005.post-26583144710936708312007-10-22T09:35:00.000+01:002007-10-22T09:35:00.000+01:00Did they miss out on something they should have kn...Did they miss out on something they should have known? Very intriguing and I love the end, the visiting black bird. with slowly flapping wings. Great!Marjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.com